I like the idea of having dialogue dots, but the blue is really hard to see against the gray since it's so small. I also can't figure out how to leave the room so I can't find the duck... unless that was the point? Your designs look good though, I can tell what they're all supposed to be. Overall I really like your narrative!
OH I GET IT! your idea is really cute! Maybe I missed something but I didn't know It was a controller until the end. After I realized, then the layout of your whole game made sense so good job placing the doors and rooms.
