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No idea if the game dev reads these, but a few thoughts:

1) The pacing for the curse/transformation feels really uneven. Early game it is happening 2-3 times a day, but in the week after the first football game I think I have gotten 1-2 period. And since we don't unlock lower body until about that point there has been barely any chance to change that area. Not saying it should maintain the same pace; it's good that it is slow enough to savor. But it should be spaced out a little more evenly, I think.

2) Just a minor thing, but it was weird having Luke and Samantha teasing MC for the t-shirt and cargo shorts (and later Jessica too) and saying he never wears anything else... when I am currently staring at a paper doll dressed in a cute kitty shirt and jeans. Seems either the ability to customize outfits should come after those scenes or they should react if MC is wearing something different.

3) Seemed weird that MC was hiding planning for cheerleading practice from Luke and Samantha when I already revealed it to them days ago? Is a variable not being read correctly, or is that version of the scene just not implemented yet?

4) Currently doing the shopping scene with Samantha and Jessica and find it weird that I have to choose between the two stores they suggest and can't go to the one where MC literally just started working (and might have an employee discount...)

5) Actually really hoping poly ends up being an option in this game.

6) Related to #1: Seriously? Picking strawberry ice cream is considered feminine enough to change, but buying a bra or a goth dress isn't? It's not just the pacing that feels inconsistent, it's the in-universe rules of the "curse".

7) Inconsistency: earlier in the week Jordan said he has never been to see a play in person, now on twins day he says he has been sneaking out to the city to watch plays for a while and keeps the ticket stubs. Unless 'a while' means like two days these statements conflict.

8) Dunno if it is intentional, but money feels quite tight. And at the end of the mall scenario everyone was making a big deal about the mountain of bags and big haul, but I could only afford two shirts, two skirts, flats, and the goth outfit. Not sure three outfits counts as a mountain. Oh, and I deliberately saved $20 for unexpected expenses but the scene still said I was broke.

My first thought: why is every online adult game with a paper doll a mtf transformation game?

My second thought: wait, this one isn't the usual forced sissification with penis cages and the like?

My third thought: oh wow, there is very little erotica to this, but the writing is wonderful!

As an agender person the story premise is a bit lost on me, but I love the realistic relationships. Plenty of minor typos, but still perfectly legible. Wish there were more pictures, or even better paper dolls of the other characters that popped up when you are in a scene with them. Also, minor thing, but would like to be able to customize surname.

Overall a very promising game, look forward to seeing it expand and grow!

What are the quick and easy requirements for Fiona's True ending? I interacted with her as little as possible in my first run because I disliked playing the victim, so not sure if I got it or not and apparently need it for the new content.