This is around the time another IF I am reading and keeping tabs on is releasing another major update. I am going to be busy reading IF towards the end of next month.
Well I am going to be looking for the public release when November comes around, but the wait is going to be the painful part. I just got done reading chapers1-13 over the weekend, and was wondering how long I would wait for the next chapter. Just imagine the surprised I was when I saw this little blog talking about release dates.
I found some of the customization, but the issue is that it is the same color as the rest of the writing. Maybe put the choices we can change and what we need to click to go to the next page as a different color? Well a color that would be easy to read that is.
I had to make a comment on the page for the Touchstarved visual novel demo warning the author about them, and that he might try stealing their work, since he made a comment on the page. He is lucky that he made it where we can't comment on the page. The worse thing he had stolen another one too.
Hey, I just want to give you heads up that there is a user named Matthew John that had already stolen two games, The Chronicles of Taldun: The Remainder Expanded Edition is the one I know isn't his. I just wanted you to know so that you can keep an eye on his account in case he tries it with yours. Will edit this once it gets resolved.
On a better note I can't wait for it to be finished.
It was at the very start of chapter 4 just above [In the dark depths of the ocean...] was the one I found. I didn't get pass the first page, since I had thought that you might want to know about it sooner than later.
I am just wondering, this is for future reference for me, what do we go to report errors or bugs? I don't know where you prefer us to send in reports for error and bugs or tell you of said errors or bugs. As soon as I started chapter 4 there is an error on top. I haven't gotten far into the chapter, as I wanted to tell you of that particular error.
It has been only four months at this point in time. People do have lives, and things can happen to where they can't write as much. Patience is a virtue.
It was so good. I wanted more of it. And I was just wondering, was it supposed end so abruptly? It seemed like there should be more, but I just want to be sure.
I remember reading the original demo that you had on dashingdon, and I am glad that I found this on my feed page. I can't wait to reread the demo, and I also can't wait for the full release of this too.
You cannot end chapter ten the way that ypu did. It was getting so good that I didn't want it to end, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I basically read the entire thing in one setting.
At the end after we met your master, where it said that he smacked our head with something, there's an error just after the part that basically says since the sun is setting, we are ready to hit the hay. The only criticism I have is the lack of a page that states 'hey this is the end of the demo.' I thought something went wrong on your end, like something in thw code was typed in wrong. I wouldn't have know that was the end of the demo if I didn't went to the comments. Other than that I did like what I had read though.
I don't know if you're going to update this, but what I read is good. I like the premise of the story, and can't wait to read what happens next. I did not want what we gotten to stop.
I just finished the demo, and I didn't want it to end at all. I had a feeling something was going to happen towards the end, and I was right. I cant wait to read more of it.
I didn't know that it got updated until I saw some asks on your Tumblr that caused me to check to see if it got updated. Holy crap, I didn't want the current chapter to end. So I can't wait for the following Friday for chapter four to be released.
Since there no way to minimize the side menu when I try to read it on my phone, the left side of what you have written is cut through by the side of the menu. If that makes sense. It's the only way I can explain it.
I read this, and itvleftvme wanting more. I can't wait for whenever you can update this. The concept, and the story seems interesting, so kepp up the good work.
For me the font color is like an off white, and is almost blending in with the white background. There's nothing stopping me from reading this when I can get to the library with my laptop, so there's no rush. I just need to take into consideration that I'm having troubles with my cellphone provider ever sense they switched to a 5G network earlier this year. Things are probably not loading correctly because of it.
The one thing critique I would give it, is that the background is not mobile friendly with how similar the font color is to it. It could be just my phone not wanting to completely load everything. Don't get me wrong, I'm still trying to read it by highlighting the words, but with bad eyes it's hard to read. Maybe have an option to switch to a dark mode, or darken the font a bit, if it is possible. I will refresh my phone to see if anything loads more.
I found this when I chose the option of asking her if she could share one with my mc.