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When Eve asked Adam to do ovetime, he should have went to his manager to discuss it. The HR are not supposed to ask this of an employee. (especially since Eve probably made it up to spend more time with Adam). Then after Eve went to his appartment, Adam shoud have went to HR (someone else in the department) to signal what happened. Because it is not normal, it's harassment, and the company need to know this. He should also talk about it with his coworkers. 

Next Adam is a carpet when interacting with Eve. Even if Mary is just his friend he should at least try to defend her. Eve insults Mary (while having seen her only one short time) and asks Adam to hate her. And all he has to say is basically "I don't know". I hope what happens after Episode 5 will be better than this because if Eve starts to manipulate him again and Adam still doesn't understand it, it's going to get boring really quickly. 

It really feels like Adam is being dumbed down for the sake of drama.

PS: I know I take this game too seriously, but I wanted to show what is realistically possible. The first Episodes really managed to hook me but with the direction of the last ones I don't think it's going to end well. 

Make sure you finished her story so far. Then, go to the Velvet Shadow to get private dances from her

This game is kind of a mix of Papers, Please for the addition of rules each day and of Jacksmith Game for the prevision of the different matchups. But this game is clearly unique and intersting in itself. Even though it is not complete yet, I can't wait to see more of it.

You are asking for feedback, so I'll gladely give you one.

Precision, I played the previous version a few months ago. 

I really like the game so far as it is really qualitative in what it offers. 

Now for the points that I am not sure about. The story choices don't seem to have an impact yet, so I don't really know where it will lead us, but I appreciate that it was added. Then the creation of the mixture is interesting as it adds interactivity, but is a bit disruptive to the rest of the game that is more straight-forward. 

Also I noticed that the 3rd section of the mix was worded a bit differently. The 1rst and 2nd section's indications are more about what should be done or not, while the 3rd section is worded as how the optimal/objective mix is (or should be). It isn't that much of a problem but can be a bit confusing. 

I'm not sure about the point of going back home for one dialog line each day except to show us that time is passing, but it may be related to something that will be implemented later. 

To conclude, I really like what I see in this game for the moment, and I also see what might be added later. I'm really intrigued by the beginning of the story even tho it is clearly incomplete at the moment. I am happy that  this game that was started during a game jam (if I remember correctly), is still being developped as its concept is really interesting.

It is one of the first post that I make for feedback so I don't know if I am supposed to do it here. Also English is not my first language so if I am not clear or understandable I apologise. And sorry for the wall of text.