Araksu

I’ve just released Shortcut: Prologue, a new interactive story built in Twine, and I’m looking for thoughtful feedback from anyone interested in grounded science fiction, emotional immersion, and narrative-driven design.

What is it?

Shortcut is an interactive fiction project — a short, self-contained prologue to a larger sci-fi narrative universe.
It’s not a game in the traditional sense — more of a snapshot from a high-stakes mission.

Genre: Grounded science fiction / space drama
Format: Twine + visuals + music
Estimated playtime: 25–35 minutes
Platform: Browser (HTML) — works on Windows, macOS, Linux
Focus: Atmosphere, tension, realism, and character interplay

Who might enjoy this?

If you prefer Gravity, Expanse, or Life (2017) over Star Wars
If you like your sci-fi without force fields, magic tech, or invincible captains
If you appreciate professionals doing their job under stress, not chosen ones
If you enjoy emotional stories that don’t spoil their own climax in the trailer

Link to the game

https://araksu.itch.io/shortcut-prologue

What kind of feedback am I hoping for?

Did the emotional arc land for you?
Were the technical details understandable and immersive — or too much?
Did the story make you want to know what comes next?
Did the music and visuals work for you (even if not original)?
Any bugs, awkward phrasings, or pacing issues you noticed?

Whether it’s small notes or big-picture thoughts, I’m grateful for all of it.

Disclaimer

This project uses third-party media for atmospheric demonstration purposes only.

This is a non-commercial passion project. All rights belong to their respective creators. A full disclaimer is shown at the start of the experience.

Thanks in advance to anyone who gives it a try.