Love this story so far!
Love the demo so far! Very descriptive writing, it really helped me imagine the world around the player.
I like it! Good descriptions and nice use of text effects! The “possessed” ending made me jump a little when it popped up.
Hmm… Have you packaged everything into the same zip file? That’s all I can think of…
I like the concept! However, it does have a bunch of broken/missing images, and there was at least one if/else error message. Needs a bit of polish, but I liked the theme!
Really helpful! I’ll definitely use this for reference when I start working in SugarCube!
The story is good, but I love the atmosphere and graphics the most!
Looks cool, however: it looks like scrollbars are disabled, so I can't even scroll down the first page.
I like the concept!
Even if it is short, I like the way you write! I’d be interested in seeing your next projects.
Short but really cute little game, really shows off the complexity of games you can make with Twine!
