The translation was fine for me, although I dont know if im the best person to speak on this as Im used to reading machine translated chinese novels lol. But I understood everything pretty much.
I found a bug during edmond's quest. The first time you do the quest it works perfectly, but if you leave to do the quest later the second time, you cant see anything but you can still interact with the trash and walk around the room.
I assume this happens because of the "Fade to Black" not being removed in RPGMaker, for the second event for edmond.
