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*SPOILER REVIEW OF THE ENDING*
My God having Weila stay with Ijis because she's deluded herself into thinking his birth mother lives on within him is SOOO good. Having the victim also be toxic is the perfect way to wrap a "gets with the rapist" ending. 


However, that epilogue has to be my biggest gripe with the story. I admit, I returned to the text after dinner, so I was a bit out of the zone, but it was just a slough to read. I like kids. Seeing Frankie really wasn't important to the story and the entire read felt like it should have taken a few paragraphs. 

Also, with how hopeful and triumphant Weila's moment was, where she comes to her feelings about seal mom and how that leads to her accepting Ijis back into her life... especially the bit about resurrecting her fertility, that was such a powerful part.

So, with the epilogue revealing that yes, she's still infertile, it felt like that moment was wasted and replaced with redundancy. I fully expected, with how its been reiterated that Ijis does not care for kids, for Weila to have aborted the offspring. Just my musings, but I feel that it would have been a more impactful moment, to show again the mindset Peripoeds have towards life and death. 

Dw I'll finish it soon and give a proper review! I won't fail you piamo. Wanna be moots on bluesky?

My gosh I only read until page 12 (depression got me) but tis is so good already! Really put a fire under me to write my own queer wrongs tales even better

Can't wait to review xoxo!

My gosh your art is soooo good! Wanna work together? I'm a pretty good writer if I do say so myself, and a big furry!

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Hey there Everyone! I'm Judy and I loooooove to write about queer wrongdoings. Especially about age gap relationships and cute boys. My second favorite manga is "Happy Sugar Life" and I went to find a yaoi version of it and left so. very. disappointed! My discord is furryguylicker, come @ me if y'all need a writer for something! I am about to be traditionally published and work with an indie artist already, so I know my stuff. Toodles! I specialize in comics!

https://bsky.app/profile/apinchofcoco.bsky.social/post/3mmanawniws2c

Your art is KILLER and totally atmospheric, wanna work together? I'm an icky trans man looking to write about other icky queers