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Heyo there! I'm Judy, nice to meet ya. I have a multi chapter comic I'm writing, and ideally we would be working together on this past the jam! A soulless mermaid, spurred on by the annoying jabbering of the Devil, decides to try and seduce a poor farmer girl in order to steal her soul for himself, only to find that he may be... catching some feelings. Each chapter is around 10 pages <3!

Hey there! I've written part of a transhet mermaid x peasant comic where a soulless man tries to seduce a farmer girl in order to steal her soul- only to *gulp* catch feelings?!

*SPOILER REVIEW OF THE ENDING*
My God having Weila stay with Ijis because she's deluded herself into thinking his birth mother lives on within him is SOOO good. Having the victim also be toxic is the perfect way to wrap a "gets with the rapist" ending. 


However, that epilogue has to be my biggest gripe with the story. I admit, I returned to the text after dinner, so I was a bit out of the zone, but it was just a slough to read. I like kids. Seeing Frankie really wasn't important to the story and the entire read felt like it should have taken a few paragraphs. 

Also, with how hopeful and triumphant Weila's moment was, where she comes to her feelings about seal mom and how that leads to her accepting Ijis back into her life... especially the bit about resurrecting her fertility, that was such a powerful part.

So, with the epilogue revealing that yes, she's still infertile, it felt like that moment was wasted and replaced with redundancy. I fully expected, with how its been reiterated that Ijis does not care for kids, for Weila to have aborted the offspring. Just my musings, but I feel that it would have been a more impactful moment, to show again the mindset Peripoeds have towards life and death. 

My gosh your art is soooo good! Wanna work together? I'm a pretty good writer if I do say so myself, and a big furry!

Your art is KILLER and totally atmospheric, wanna work together? I'm an icky trans man looking to write about other icky queers