Okay, if you want constructive criticism then I'll give it to you.
I realize that your game is just an indie horror game. However:
1. Your fridge sounds very loud and intrusive, you should make it much quieter.
2. There is no menu (ESC button) in the game, accordingly there are no settings. I think this has a bit of a negative impact on the game experience. In the settings should be at least volume and sensitivity settings.
3. Working with light is complicated, but it would be good for you to learn it, as the light has a great impact on the gameplay. I would also advise you to learn how to bake light (if you haven't already).
4. You have arranged the furniture, but you should have also changed its materials and changed the smoothness to zero.
5. The circle in the center of the screen should have been reduced, personally my preference so don't be discouraged.
To begin with, the whole horror of this passage began with the refrigerator we have at work. The hardest and toughest part of this game was standing through the whole shift, that fridge was really weighing on my brain.
I could say that you're good for learning, but I can see that you absolutely don't want to try harder on games. Let's go over the basics:
1. you didn't bother to change ANYTHING, you just put in shitty furniture that shines, all you have to do is change the material, it looks cheesy.
2. TV. Why is it green? Same here, you were too lazy to change its material.
3. The lighting. Absolute lack of logic in its arrangement. I do not even know how to describe it, why do you have in random places on the map just appears light? There are no flashlights or any other logical light sources, it's just a light source with nothing. By the way, the lanterns from where the light should essentially shine are black xD
3. Glass. There is absolutely no glass anywhere in the house: on the windows, on the blender, on the microwave. Not even the shelf in the bathroom has glass on it! There's just white materials everywhere.
4. Animations. About them briefly, just miserable.
5. The plot. Absolute lack of logic and common sense, the plot as such no from the word at all. Why a man in the form of a cat? Why does our father so shit on everything? And why did our father finally come out with a tent in the middle of the night with a gun on the street next to us?
This is clearly my worst gameplay ever, I've replayed almost every game on this site and this was the worst.
My advice is to stop riveting games without end, start thinking and learn something new.
Один черт знает как работают алгоритмы итча, но моя игра тоже отлично залетела, хотя, мягко говоря, она ужасна. По скринам и описанию твоя игра мне понравилась, я согласен что неравноправно оставлять такое без внимания. И, кстати, если игра плоха, она не будет держаться в топе дольше недели-другой, постепенно в топ возвращаются давно всеми забытые крутые игры, думаю, это что-то значит. В любом случае я не считаю лучшей идеей завидовать этому, просто продолжай делать то что приносит тебе удовольствие. (со шрифтами и вправду беда :D)
Hi. I couldn't find any other way to contact you so I'm writing here. I'm writing about Egg Fried Rice. My friend and I passed your wonderful game a long time ago, and we were still wondering: How did you make this wonderful aquarium? True, after trying 1000 variants we still did not understand how you did it. Please, if you can help and tell the secret of this aquarium - write here and give contacts, or write to me in discord: .kruasan.
привет! это была наша первая игра, поэтому все так, как ты видишь. мы специально внесли долю юмора в обстановку вокруг, дабы все не выглядело слишком шаблонно. Насчет сюжета вообще отдельная история, на коленках писался и согласись, концовка вышла не плохой, если не душнить ;)
Thank you very much for your feedback! I don't really understand the situation why this task was left on the screen. more details are needed to fix this error.
Thanks for telling us about it ! As I said in my message to the players, yes, we have difficulties with translation because we are not English. We will definitely fix it!
p.s. I just couldn't understand why everyone goes back to the bus stop xD
As such there is no ending as the player has to figure it all out himself . but the basic idea was that we are the bean and he has schizophrenia. the black essence is his second personality and the bean killed the salesman without realizing it.
Thanks for playing the game ! Yes, I do know about these bugs and I'm already working on fixing them. Thank you for pointing them out and telling me about them, not just giving me a bad rating.
Thanks for playing the game! We really appreciate your youtube videos and we're glad you enjoyed them. Thank you for your appreciation, it's a motivation for us to keep moving forward.
Hi! Thanks for your criticism! We are very happy that you liked our game) We did not make the name of the store because of a small error in development, but I think it's not critical. Also, thank you for believing in us, we are new indie developers and we will continue to develop and release new games!
Thank you very much for playing our game! We tried to make it high quality, but since it's our first game, it didn't come out very well. Thank you for your feedback! We really appreciate any criticism.
