If I had any critique to offer, it'd probably be in the main character. She doesn't seem to have much of a personality (as of yet) or unique traits other than her depressed outlook on life. As this was just a demo version I'm sure she develops more later on though, that was just my impression.
This was very good! The art and music is pleasing and builds a unique, soft but cold vibe. The story itself is also intriguing and the characters are all written into the plot seamlessly and have an important role to play. Just as I started to really get into it unfortunately, it ended... I hope to see a full release soon, this was a highly promising start.
This was an incredible story, deeply emotional and very touching. Definitely brings out some very poignant themes of the past, present, and future, and really questions in the end what ultimately makes a human, a human. The ending is particularly tragic, but at the same time grudgingly realistic. The writing is brilliant and the story develops these characters realistically over the course of the experience. My only gripes would be the general lack of sound effects, questionable music appropriateness in certain scenes, and the absence of CG/splashes which would have really upped the immersion.
