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That is me singing (Jake Smith)! Bryan Henry sang the vocals for our other entry! Thank you so much for the kind words! It makes it all worth it for me when someone enjoys one of my songs! Your entry was amazing!

Good job!

Nice job!

Nice! Personally, I wish the music had a little more 80s feel to it.

Nice idea!

Ah, I see! Well I hope the move wasn't too bad! Make sure to get some rest!

Thanks for the listen and comment! Yeah, I think you're right! Part of me worried that it would blend in too much with the bass, but maybe I was just being paranoid haha

I went ahead and added some Low Pass Filter! Check it out and let me know what you think!

Very nice!

Really enjoyed the theme being passed between different instruments! That was a nice touch! I also liked the squeeky noise at the end! Great tune!

I really liked this one! I thought it wasn't so silly in the beginning with a minor key, but it definitely picked up and I could see the silliness! Great job!

I think it would serve the song well if you added a B section, and shook up the arrangement a bit more at times. That being said, I enjoyed the ukelele! Very chill vibes! Very nice!

I enjoyed it! I can see where all the caffeine went haha :D

Nice entry!

For me, it is a tad bit long, but nice job!

Very ethereal!

Bossa novas are always fun! Nice!

Great!

It didn't seem very silly to me, but I liked the groove of the song!

Really good! I enjoyed it a lot!

I like it! I wish it was a little longer!

Solid submission!

I thought this piece fit the theme well! I liked the little squeeky noise you added as well! I would have liked to hear a little more experimenting with that idea! I felt it ended a little abruptly, but overall I enjoyed it! Well done!

Cool idea for a song!

I like the percussive instruments you used!

Very nice!

I really like the percussion and the relaxed atmosphere! If I had to choose one thing about it that I'd do differently, I'd like to hear a bit more of a strong melodic hook, but that's just my personal taste! Good job!

Nice submission!

Heck yeah! Thanks for letting me know! I appreciate it! Always glad to hear that my intuition lead me in the right direction! That's a testament to the symbolism in your art! Same to you! I think it's an awesome piece of artwork! :D

Thank you very much! Happy to hear you enjoyed it! I very much enjoyed writing this piece for the artwork, so thank you for drawing it!

Glad to hear I achieved my goal! Thank you very much!

Thank you very much! Glad to hear you enjoyed it!

Glad to hear you had fun! Looking forward to seeing what we can both come up with!

I don't feel like it matches the prompt for this submission much, but it seems a better fit for the artwork you have on your project. Seems like those two went on quite the journey! :D I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this! Good job!

Felt very dark in tone. The arrangement was really nice and production was great! Well done!

Has a very tense feel to it! I could see this in a game scene where the developers wanted a lot of anticipation to be built up! 

I felt like it was a different fit than the prompt, but other than that I enjoyed it! Nice production and arrangement! Could definitely see it in a game!

It stopped a little abruptly IMO, but I thought it was good!

I liked your choice of instruments for the song!

I think you captured the feel of a tragic story and I thought the transitions between sections were really well done!

Stepping outside of comfort zones and trying something new is the only way we grow! Happy to see you tried and I wish more people would to be honest! Good first attempt and I hope you keep trying and learning!