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I left the game after Carpo chapters and waited for more since now... And this beautyful story was still worth it. Good, good job Story Anon. When the risk for the story to become boring was high, you twisted it. It was easy to foresee, but still well done. I keep appreciating your honesty, how you take your work seriously, but also make us laugh of it, make its flaws something good.  Congratulations, keep the good work.

SPOILERS ABOUT THE LAST CHAPTERS

Very interesting the choice of making the goddesses greek deities. 3 are, if I'm correct, minor deities, nimphs ecc, while Hebe, mistaken for the weakest for most of the story, is actually a pure goddess. Correct me if I recall wrongly.

Also about Hebe, for the goddess contact and comprension, I deeply appreciated for her to have a socratic approach to discussions and subjects. She asks, rarely affirms, she makes the characters (and us) reason on the matter and find the answer, she doesn't give the answer itself.  Maybe it's casual, but still I appreciated it a lot. Favourite goddess of the four... For now.

Damm, it hurts. And made me angry, and I hated and... Thank you. This visual novel. Though brief and simple is really close to what I felt in the past, what I feel towards the world and how I would describe it. The characters are real, grey, tridimensional. And though you can simply hate them... You can still understand them. It was a painful read but one I don't regret. I like your art, the writing and the music. I deeply appreciated your work... It moved me. 

From what I seen the game has potential. I Hope you reach your goals and maybe create a new game, maybe continue this One. Good luck!

Spoiler...?

It's not an in game event yet. I think they  do rites together or something

It worked, thanks you!

Did it and I gained enough money, but she keeps starving... I'll try again, thanks anyway

I can, but there's only the options: Eat, store, throw away. And the gift option let's me give her only desserts. I gave her but nothing, keeps telling she's starving

How to feed Ako? I tried to gift her, male her cook for herself... But She keeps starving. I don't know If I didn't get It or there's a bug or something 

I really appreciate how honest you've been about this story untill now. That's what makes it special. Alone the game is quite boring, gameplay here and there, but it's more of a visual novel, horror, psychological. Teen drama... seems like a strange mix. The premises are... mid. But the story actually works pretty well and in my opinion the characters are what makes people stay. Giving us all (or almost) the povs is a good choice, and showing emotionally conflicted characters it's even better. No black or white but grey shades. That's why I'm loving Leah. And hating her. And loving her. And... you get it.  Even if she doesn't beat the perfection of Kieran. Nice job, I'm touched.

I think this is one of the sweetest game I found on itch io. Well written, both characters and plot, chill osts, hot scenes (usually i'm for the straight ones, but here I wasn't bothered, maybe cause there wasn't too much exageration). The themes are well exposed, I mean if you play this game not knowing so much about gender and sexuality spectrums, with an open mind, you can learn something and also have fun. Also, as a nerd I very appreciated the references on pop culture. Great job so far! Maybe it's an impression, but I see a lot of love and heart in this game, and already love It. I can't wait for the new release!

Well, good work for now, I really enjoied it. Fudge is so precious and I quite like the bratty magic girl.

GG, author! That's how a game should be. It entertains and humors, has a simple, still good, plot, and as a adult game it does his work. Also I appreciate the effort in the personalities of characters, the dialogues and the different minigames. The worst thing for a game is to bore... but with this pearl there's no risk! Please, keep the great work!

In my opinion, the game is quite good, but it could be more. One of the things that bored me the most was the gameplay. The fact that things appens periodically... So you play like a robot untill the next event. I understand it's the story of a depressed person, but not all the players are... maybe a few casual events? Or simply more events and action during the day. 

Another issue, for me are the scenes. The animation is good, bodies aren't rigid like other games, but, a big but, to see a gif with sound for a minute, I prefer skipping. And that's a problem in an adult game... Maybe more interaction and action during the scene? 

Sorry for the wall of text.

Man, I wrote I think it was a year ago, but I want to renew my congratulations for your job. I think I'll play it one last time, enterely,for the full realise, but for now I love what I read. The mage route was my favourite, but I think the slave one can be interesting. Keep the good job!!

Great work! I read your statement in the "about" option, and to think you had to shorten the game made me wonder how it would have been, since I liked this version so much. I can't wait to see your other games!

Does the game support controller?

Nice! Only bug so far: I keep saves, a lot actually, but sometimes lose scenes and achievements

I truly admire your work! It's rare to find a visual novel like this: good rhythm, an interesting story and choices who matters for real, not only for romance. I think extras like a list of endings and a gallery would be a great add, but the game is still in develepment, it's up to you. Good job!!