Hi! Good game u re developing here. One pint of criticism if i may add, as a personal opinion (and i guess spoiler?), considering the direction of the quests, I guess u plan on abolishing elf slavery for the end game? I was more inclined for the game to focus on consolidating the bussines or bussineses, growing the harem and strenghten the bonds with big shots in the city, all in all to grow in power and influence, not to put everything and everyone in danger cuz we cant say "no" to delusional requests like "lets abolish slavery" (Lin quests, Maria quests), like we re not in charge of the hotel (story) anymore, the girls are :)) No hate, just an opinion..
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Hey man, so... I just started this game and I want to give you a review. As far as I saw, this game is rly promising. The bandit scene was rly cool, Im glad u did the MC killing them all, even it could be a little bit gore, but this isnt a kids game anyway. Im tired of pussy MC, scared to fight, scared to fuck, scared to do anything in the beginning. The map with a lot of locations is a huge plus for the game, thats what made me get this game. The characters are nicely done, u didnt made them ugly, nor the girls or the MC (I saw some ugly characters in other games). The story is ok, perhaps a little basic with "moving in the city" or whatever, but its not sth bad, dont worry, plus, I havent played a lot yet, just got to the family cute foursome (Im a degenerate, I know, dont mind dont care). Im looking forward for more content and Im going to leave some suggestions in the future, maybe after I finish this version. Kisses :*
Edit, I finished the game. Short. So short. But promising. Im encouraging you to continue this. It could turn in a great game!
OK, so as other guy said, u should add name of the locations on the map, and perhaps make easier to move through my own house xd. U could add more fetishes (no ntr), but I guess its planned already. I would personally like to see something like yandere and maybe slave routes, bdsm is nice too. U could split the quests in story and side quests, and make some quests secret, like we need to do sth specifically or be somewhere to trigger them. I like the shit ton of skills and perks, u could add more xdd, and I like the owning businesses ideea very much. U can even make them upgradable or customisable. Maybe. With girls to hire, and u know where Im going from here :).