“she’s not doing it to fill the air—she’s doing it to find the overlap, to locate the points where your map and hers share a line.”
“—and he listens with the sort of attention that makes you aware of what you’re saying, his focus a quiet pressure you feel more than see”
This was very clearly written or aided by generative AI, It’s in almost every single paragraph. The constant over explanation that doesn’t fit or feels extremely flowery is a huge indicator of AI. Even more so when it’s so prevalent that ive seen it more than 10+ times and I’m right at the start.