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This story was so compelling, I had to keep replaying until I'd covered all the options! Very interesting relationship dynamics - the rest of the story can't come quickly enough! Great work, team.

Oh my my...Leander!!!

The opening scene had me wondering what I'd gotten into, but then it got better...then it got great! Such a sweet story. Love it! And Eli is such a darling, too.

Firstly, well done, team! The UI is stunning, the settings are gorgeous, the storyline is intriguing, the music is lovely and overall, I think you're on to a winner. 

Now, on to what I didn't love. I feel like the characters lack definition and appear a bit too ethereal compared to the vividness of the backgrounds, a bit like they're ghosts and not entirely solid. If this is intentional, then please excuse me. The other thing is, maybe you could tweak the playlist a little? It sometimes felt like I'd been listening to the main theme for forever, lol! I did find the writing a little bit naive from time to time, but Alaris is better than other VNs I've read in this regard.

All in all, I think this project has amazing potential. You've done a great job so far and I wish you everything of the best with the rest of the dev!

Hey guys! Thank you for this amazing asset - I really love the fully editable version in particular. Could you please think about doing this for one of your male sprites?

Sutemo, thank you - I absolutely love this sprite! It would be amazing if you could make a male equivalent.