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Love it! Even though I was looking through Hii-chan's eyes, I felt very distinctly that I could see her weird expressions, lol

Just incredible, heartbreaking, a beautiful memorial. 

Tiny bug report, Tels is mislabeled as Kit for one line at the beginning of the conversation with the aide

Really strong, potent work with all the pieces in place. Runtime, format, sound, color, just all pointed at full strength in one direction. Xelia living one lifetime away from being able to live in peace or being exalted as a folk hero for her actions after they've been stripped of the gory details is melancholic and ominipresent. 

It's cute that she likes fishing.

 LONER_DOG was not required though it added some texture. It was also an emotionally tougher read.

Minor typo, I think conscious is swapped in for conscience in a few places

(edit: sorry, I accidentally deleted the post. this is the same post. what a mess)

In the egalitarian future women also get invited to the Kaiji torture nexus for bloodsport. The duel was very disgusting. Awesome

The prose is very compelling and well paced, I felt like I was reading a novel. Leïla longing for the relationship that never existed in the form that she wanted it to made me tear up a bit. Looking forward to the rest of it. 

Another pervert woman who fits right in with a pantheon of eroge protagonists but even better (worse?), may women continue to reach new levels of delusional esoteric and and self-obsessed, amen!!!!

(typed in the first 5 minutes of opening) Full bush???!! FULL PIT????!!!! (ᵔ▿ᵔ)

Also, is the thing under Miriam's bed a gun?

Obviously this doesn't capture all of my thoughts in proportion to the number of words I just read but this is so...awesome! Spectacular! Severely enjoyed that a 'dating routes' type of mechanic was hinted at and that I got scolded for it. It's everything I dreamed of whenever I read a VN and thought oh, but I wish this protagonist was a woman...lovable scumbag women are underutilized after all 
I'll definitely back to read and digest sections (and the other works), it's exactly the level of dream and abstraction that makes chuuni-flavored storylines so delicious poetic and moving. And flippantly: I'm haunted by the idea of Miriam no panties

So sweet! I love how EGL pieces look like something you could actually buy!

Sat there with my mouth open at many parts. Play to enjoy an entire world, multiple generations, and multiple lifespans in a single sitting

Incredible moments of magical realism. Like biting into something but finding out it was hard plastic the whole time. Great! 

Loved the whole art design and writing package, Fina is very fun. Maybe she's rude but maybe you shouldn't be making her get out of bed. Makes me think about a stat raising simulator being run by the worm in your brain 

Women in STEM

Really great... I love how naturally the setting and visuals work together. Good ratio of explained to implicit. Perfect place to end a short story.

Played this during the erohorror jam. This one really moved me for various reasons…really really into how much it leaned into the dehumanizing feeling that accompanied knowing these peoples' futures and the difference between feeling things vs intellectualizing them 

Very cool, disarming, and romantic

Played this right after the erohorror jam. Really cool stuff that I could imagine extended into an even longer geopolitical struggle LOGH style

Hop on peak. Great experience, tasteful eroguro, nice allegory, vivid and cool design  

Saved and reloaded for the other dialogue options on what to do over winter break because I was so excited for her. It's a very thoughtful story. There's a great balance where I felt very led by the hand to the message by the mechanics, Winnie's conversation, the flashback convo bits at the beginning of the loop, the teacher's lecture (the list goes on...) while still feeling I had some element of free will.

I had to peek at the key once but I wish I'd taken notes instead!

Xiruo's games are so incredibly polished to the point where it seems dangerous that her plot and pacing are also moving... Isn't that too much power for one person? The comic storyboarding and umbrella interstitial were seriously impressive. Anyway...

I was very touched by this. A tender and thoughtful story of two people on their journey through young adulthood and the loss and transformation that comes through it. An exploration of their personal and family lives plays out very naturally. Not too gentle, not too cruel, the side characters (again as expected of Xiruo) are their own fully-fledged characters with actualized existences beyond the main plotline.