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its so intersting, amazing job with the voice actor tho idek if it was you but it sounded nice instead of just reading subtitles!

Amazing game, and also I liked the storytelling and the art of the game!!

Hi, I really liked the game, but maybe the endings could have been improved. I played it two times, where I first answered him, but I think it was too plain. Maybe make the story more expandable and let us know more about what would happen. Like when you answered your phone, there could be a crash accident, and then you thought it was your fault because you answered him and called him. So then you start taking pills for depression, but they do not make you better, and then you start seeing this figure in your room (your dead friend), maybe not sure, or just a strange figure who is following you all the time. Then you keep taking the pills, but you cannot take them anymore because they just make you worse, so what you do is kill yourself or die in your bed by taking pills. That could be one ending. I feel the story had some potential, but overall, it looked good. I liked the assets and the grainy effect, though, overall good job!!

One last thing I would consider is after the cutscene, like when the story intro finished, I thought there was more story, but there was not until I moved the mouse. I feel like some UI for an intro tutorial would be cool, like “use the mouse to look around” or “use WASD for moving,” you know, typical stuff.