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I don't know if it's the correct thing for telling what it tells, boring to read in general but I felt some emotion at the end.

The narrative elements don't say anything to me, but the atmosphere is fine. I enjoyed exploring the first level with its simple puzzle more than the shooting part. For some reason my computer doesn't like this game, so I couldn't finish it.

Clearly a very interesting commentary on the nature of the task in the video game. I like the ending.

The drawings are cute, pretty, and sexy. The story doesn't make a lot of sense and the various elements don't fit together very well, but it's not boring to read. I liked the simple but fun interactive part. Also elves. If a longer version came out, I'd probably play it.

I hope someday to write something that comes close to being as good as this. Just talking about it in any critical way makes me want to vomit from how much it shows how fake and manipulative I am. The weight of the present could not be more immediate.