The real novel was the devlog written along the way.
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Even with the change to Diego's neck, his anatomy is still really strange. He has too much belly considering that most of his body doesn't really look fat. He looks like he either has terrible posture (pushing his belly forward) or is actually pregnant.
Sound settings don't work. Even if I turn down the volume in the menu, it neither saves or nor applies it ingame. Also the menu is kinda busted in general, try, for example, opening the sound menu and then pressing enter.
I wish this had a better hook to start the story. Finding someone stranded on a beach is a weird situation to immediately go "I'm gonna sign you up for a school" rather than "I'll bring you to a hospital".
I'm digging this, but I really feel like the default text could really use some better formatting. Having 4 lines of bigger text would be great, the potential 7 lines of tiny text that can hit you early on are a bit much.
Speaking of that, day 6 (Shoichi) is mostly inconsistent with what Yuuichi is supposed to be wearing.
And one thing I always wanted to mention is that when praising Shoichi on day 9, his sprite stays gigantic.
The party was added this update, so you shouldn't miss that when doing Shoichi's CS events. Jun's were last update. Are you sure you're on the latest version?
As for choices, they don't make a big difference as of yet. But you do get bits of different dialogue depending on what you choose. You might want to try different options if you're interested.
Yes, Shoichi only has 3 CS (heart) events. The other characters have a couple more because for Shoichi, it really doesn't take that long for you (Yuuichi) to get on his good side.
0.17 is the latest version.
Hey there. I'm getting an exception in the new update.
Exception: Parameter 'new widget' is not known by ATL Transform.
CS_Jun7.rpyc, line 268
Can't look into the file because you have hidden them from plain sight but it looks like the scene change there is somewhat broken.
Anyway though, thanks for the new stuff. I really appreciate your work.
I'm a bit curious though, are you advertising this at all? Or at least getting the word around? I'm surprised I've never heard anything about this even though you've been working on it for a while. In my opinion your first two chapters are easily good enough to show off a little bit and maybe get some more people following.