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Definitely gonna give it a try as soon as I'm available!
Carrot you're so precious for gifting us so many wonderful games , stories and memories, please hang on tight buddy, things will start taking a turn, don't give up. I wish for you and your partner the best :3
Keep in mind , we, your followers, have your back and if things get rough you can rely on us, it'd feel great to support you on Patreon or Kofi or anywhere, you deserve it!!!
yekkusu I want to be honest and provide constructive feedback if that's ok with you guys. Again, this is just my opinion and in no way do I mean what I'm about to say with ill intention. I'll be rating this VN 5/5 stars though because I don't want to affect your overall score, but I want to share my thoughts here:
Things I liked this VN:
The plot and setting
The characters
The art and design
The soundtrack is nice and cozy
Things I didn't like and which I think could be improved or tweaked a bit:
I don't know that much about programming, but I really don't like the engine you chose to design this VN with. I don't know whether this is an engine or optimization issue but as soon as I execute the game it consumes almost all of my PC's resources, this is something I haven't experienced when running visual novels on Renpy or Unity.
The text is too small , I wish I had the option to change the size.
The fastest text speed available feels slow.
I wish I could press a key to skip dialogue instead of having to click the skip dialogue option (at least I couldn't find which key does this, and tried all of them)
My main criticism. The writing isn't bad at all, and,as I said before, I liked the plot so far. I do think, however, that the pacing is a bit slow and the prose feels too descriptive for my taste.
Some things you detail, should maybe be shown instead. I personally don't like exposition that much, and maybe we get too much information and description about certain elements that you might consider opting out, so the plot can flow more dynamically.
That's it, please I don't want to offend you, I'm simply suggesting that some pieces of information might work better if you offered it through dialogue between characters.
Looking forward to the next build!
Thank you so much for everything you've already done. This is heartbreaking not because of the VN but because I wasn't aware you were struggling so much, you owe us nothing, your life comes first, please take care , everything will be solved and turn out fine eventually, don't ever stop fighting, you have all of our support.
Ok, I'm definitely in love with Julian, he's such a pure bean who deserves nothing but happiness, and, Ash's story hits so hard, I need everyone in this story to just be happy.
What a beautiful VN you guys have created, it's a 10/10
Can't wait for the next build, I think I should start supporting the Patreon at this point cuz I need to know what happens next ASAP!