itch.io

Spoiler-ish warning.

Wow, this visual novel is really good. I do get the sense that of something....off, to say the least. Like with the equalizer thing itself, it is used in a political sense with them trying to stop TSG, which objectively good, it does bring up a lot of troubling questions like could certain governments or movements use them for political gain or to oppress the masses through installing contempt with the current system in power? Who knows, perhaps I'm over thinking it and I did have a glass of whiskey before writing so take this with a lot of salt. Come to think of it's more of a thought/observation.  

One thing I do want to want to point out is some of the bits of where it states Lucian is selfish for things that seem like normal reactions. For example him trying to run away after getting drugged, interrogated, and James suggesting that he gets killed. Yah, no. Running away is the sane thing to do.It definitely comes off, and going back to what I mentioned before, the other equalisers don't have the best intentions in mind. I could be wrong but eh. Not to say he is without flaws, I can see in sections where him being whiny and selfish do come into play, including in the prolog which highlights it the most. But besides that, holy crap you guys did an amazing job. Also the stuff with the evil aspect is just a Chef's kiss. good job there. I cant recall but there was a bit of a jump scare earlier on with the audio, I hated that so much but in a good way. Congrats on that. The writing aside from what I said is also super good. I want to end it hear so I can read the rest. 

Wow, I love the black and white sketch look 

ok ill take a bite. Ill have to check it out later but from what im reading it sounds neat. 

same on windows.

When the bell rang the first time, I think it was chapter 2 or 3, I'm not too sure, the audio for the bell would continue into the scene at Gurley with Oscar and Kevin at the gun store until the zombie noise. It stopped when I scrolled back and would not come back unless you reload before the scene. Also in that scene the images of Brandon Finn and Nev appeared in the top right before fading into where they are supposed to go. There is also a rollback error I encountered, here is what it said:

 “game/script.rpy” line 1879, in script

 scene huntsvillealley with fade (0.1) 

Typeerror: Fade() missing 2 required positional arguments: ‘hold_time’ and ‘in_time’

That's about all the bugs I remember encountering. 

Aside from some bugs, this was really good. 

Both, both were good, I had some pierogi from this polish restaurant near where my sister used to work. I also had some bigos I think. 

Well done, looking forward to the next update. Some of the food mentioned I just tried, tastes good.