Really great job with Chapter 7. About half way through chapter 7 I almost gave up because it was looking so dark for CeCe and even the MC. I paused the whole thing for nearly two weeks before going back and finishing the chapter - and I have to say "Nice Save after what you did in Chapter 6!" I wanted a positive outcome because of the back story of the several characters you've created that have turned out to have depth. I'm wondering now where you're going to go with the next update. Thanks for the great work so far! You've got me hooked!
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I just finished Chapter 6, and no real offense intended here but I agree with Koda and Gazza1230 - the ending was devastating. I get the point about suicide as a problem and would commend you on the quality not only of the overall story so far and in having this chapter in the novel. But I lost two friends in High School to suicide and another friend a few years later. I, too, hope there is some redemption for Cece but the scenario is so real it hurts.
But for the relatively common use of over-busty MILFs, this is actually a good story with interesting backstories and divergent personalities. I hope you complete it. Like a few others, came for the sex but now find myself engaged in the story. Hoping you add some chapters soon! I coughed up some change for your bonuses too.