Loved the game - found it after Red Pearls of Borneo, which I also enjoyed. A few (well-meaning!) comments:
Jbeqyr tnzr trgf grqvbhf vs lbh snvy gur svsgu zhygvcyr gvzrf. V guvax v qvq 5 ebhaqf bs vg sbe n gbgny bs 25 jbeqyrf.
Gur whzc gb svther bhe jura 0 orpbzrf n snpgbe va gur tnzr vf abg boivbhf.
N ovg grqvbhf purpxvat nyy ebbzf vs gurer vf n 99 pnzren srrq gb frr vs gurer vf fbzrguvat tbvat ba va n ebbz gura jbexvat onpxjneqf gb svyy gur tncf.
N pbzcyrgvbavfg glcr rznvy jbhyq or tbbq bapr nyy ebbzf unir orra purpxrq jbhyq or urycshy - jnf nyfb purpxvat Gvzrfgnzcf bs 00 naq 18+ orpnhfr abg nyjnlf pyrne vs lbh unira'g sbhaq 17-OV-0-N-Y.
Abg boivbhf jura gb chg gur cnffjbeq va.
Fgehttyrq gb svther bhg ubj gb chg gur anzrf va sbe n ovg gbb ybat. Jnfa'g ragveryl boivbhf ng svefg tynapr.