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love the classic text adventure game feel paired with the visuals. even though some beats were predictable, your style makes up for it and keeps the game extremely unique nonetheless!

i really like this game! story based games like these have always been my thing and im invested in all the different storylines. i havent played through them all, but everything i have seen so far has been fun (yet tedious where it needs to be - the quota of 15 that was my fault lmao) gameplay and contains interesting plotlines. there are only a few issues ive noticed (mostly dialogue):

• when youre living with hud, duo asks if you can take some mapota to the arcade owner. if you take it yourself, right in front of him, then speak to him, he thanks you for the delivery

• in one playthrough i got caught cheating to see what would happen. the first time, the cop uncle says he “heard you left the job fair” (despite girt having just been banned by the teacher) but the second time he said he “heard you flunked.” the first time, the factory worker (gary?) skipped his usual dialogue and said “hope you made the right choice” instead of asking about the factory job. the second time, he used his usual dialogue - and trying to directly recreate the first cheating scenario hasnt worked (the teacher says “im disappointed in you” instead of “cheating was your own decision” like in the first run?)

• in the vote sorting game, occasionally the votes and boxes disappear but a point is still tallied. this rarely happens and the game progresses as usual afterward, but with one free point

the replayability of the demo alone is huge and im excited to see where this project goes! you are a talented author and creator and i want to wish you luck in completing it :)