I was kinda confused about the places i was supposed to go, but that was mitigated by a SPECIAL SOMEONE sitting next to me and guiding me along the way >:)
Very well made game! I love the attention to detail, and the great art-style!
There are some problems though.
1. The background on the fishing scene is just a blank slate, with colors in the bottom right.
2. (I know this would be a pain to make) But on the first time you go out fishing, you should add a "1 fish limit", because no matter what you do, he always says "Good job yesterday, but 1 fish won't do much for us", even though i caught three.
3. On the 3rd day, i spoke to the shivering man at the bottom of the screen, he disappeared after his dialogue was done.
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Some positive notes for you, too!
1. I really enjoy the fact, you add variation to the fishing minigame, with at least 3 or 4 different routes being given to you.
2. You added an ending to your game, and it doesn't make you confused at all, and it fits very, very nicely in that part of the game.
3. Overall good job, it was quite dialogue heavy, but that is to be expected in these kinds of games.
This is the Intro-phase of our game, it is meant to be dialogue heavy, while easing you into the controls (Which we still need to add in a future update.)
The game is, as stated in our description, a prototype. What you are currently seeing is an introduction to the story of Sadie Browne, and it will be flushed out a bit later on. :)
We are currently working on an expansion to the story. while we do agree that the backgrounds are very bland, we need it to maintain the visibility of our player character (And other NPCs) :)
