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i have now found out that i do, in fact, have problems with my vision. yippee

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do you have someone to read through and correct any mistakes? If not I think it would be a good idea to have someone other than yourself do that so as to see errors you might not have noticed. Great job so far

whenever I read this, I only ever imagine the sweet boy as a black labrador. I don't know why, I've never had a black labrador, I just cannot imagine him otherwise

Leo and Leo jr, very good name choices :)

this is one of my favourite games here on itch.io, keep up the good work :]

I have replayed this many times, your work is very well written and really fun to read as well :]

i dont quite understand it but it is very nice :]

very nice :] , though there are a few mistakes in the writing and grammar

pretty good, cant wait to see more :]

i agree, i have no problem with my vision but it made the writing seem out of focus and blurry

Oh and i also love how you incorporated a few languages into one of the parts, I especially enjoyed seeing the welsh language as I believe it is a language that many overlook when writing stories like this :]

Liam is probably one of my favourite characters in any of the interactive fiction on this site, excellent character development! I cannot wait until the next part is released, don't overwork yourself though :]

I just cannot wait for the next update, this is probably my favourite game on this entire website and ill be shaking in my boots when the next episode is released!!!!

I just realised that the grandfathers name is edward amser, amser means time in welsh. Was this intended or a coincidence?

Aeran. I wish Aeran was a real person as I love his character soooo much omg