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I did play a version of it. If A3 is the current one then no, not that. I played it a ways back and didn't keep up with it. 

I don't have alt accounts. Truthfully I've downvoted you two times total, both when I felt you were being mean spirited.  

I have played goddess maker though. I didn't like it when I played it.

You didn't answer my question either.

My thought was it's chapter 1

Fully understandable.

Okay, I'm not 'contrarian', I'm pointing out it's exhausting to have you not just pick a lane or pour contempt on people enjoying something.  

You still haven't explained what, if any, answer to how Chad, the female character here and male in your game used for what I think was an exploration of maledom/masculinity, defined in your version and explained to be one for one. Unless your Chad's secretly Yaoi for your male MC in lab of gods?  

This is too mean spirited to earn a comment. 

I can't wait to see. Hopefully you're going to give the first section some reshoots and tightening. 

1. That's fine, but don't be upset I don't really seem too interested.  You're pushing me to try something I looked at and found unappealing. Way too much investment for something that even crosses into areas that disgust me.

As to your sub part, You should just fully endorse it then? Mostly seems counter productive to waffle. That's just me though, really just left my impressions since I had fun.

2. Okay, that sounds different than this. Female/male etc.  I understand, I've played Ascension way back and had thoroughly forgotten about it when I came across this. I understand your concept and the evolutionary connection, but this is a mod. 

Last I checked that was 1. patron only so lots of people will have to go into a high entry bar to even try it and 2. Chad is a guy in your version which is repellent to me. 

Having played Ascension , I understand the lifting of the DNA, but I don't know they are apple for apple at this point. 

yes. I am aware of underlying mechanic lifting for gameplay mechanics, but there is a break as I'm confident you're writing is better edited/polished, though it's been awhile since I've read or paid attention to it.

my point is if you just plug something into AI it'll be terrible. But if you do the work creating then use it as a tool it actually has ability. But people who don't work with those programs don't understand how intensive good use becomes.

Review.

The game has tons of potential.

The writing needs work and I'd hope this first part gets a major face lift. 

1. Chad (PLEASE change the name)/MC. Chad needs major work. Her motives toward MC are less clear and at times it doesn't make sense. That said the conceit is excellent. Chad needs a goal, personality lift, and a rethink of her mechanics a little bit. Does she hate MC? is she a possessive Bully who secretly NEEDS MC as a focal point of identity? I'd argue chad needs her baseline personality, dominant personality as she loses it a little driving for goddess hood, and submissive personality as she BREAKS.

2. The routes need rethinking. You have dominant and normal, it should be bifurcated into dominant and submissive. One is about MC outgrowing to the increasing dismay and helplessness of Chad. The climax is Chad frustrated unable to feel big. Chad's growth should only occur if she can feel like an ALPHA, rather than the giantification that she gets in both routes. This distinguishes, improves playability, and most importantly is coherent. 

3. Consequence. Chad currently disappears. For me at least, rather than Pearl's broken but cool entries or Candi being put into things, the chapter needs chad's skeleton. Chad should be done, either going toward a dominant goddess or submissive to MC. From there once a week she reappears, like pearl does except instead of demanding serum, MC has consequence. If goddess Chad won, she takes your money, forces you to spend Thursday getting fucked by her and this costs. you a day and cash, real consequences. Conversely, sub chad is optional, you can even choose to steal size or demand tribute from her. It'd be something that could be fleshed out at leisure once the skeleton of the mechanic is established with it and events being things that can be added in at will when there's a lull. 

anyway, I hope there's a brush over of chapter 1 on this stuff. Don't get discouraged.

Not if he does the work. AI doesn't just mean speed if your using it correctly