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everything else was cool though. the art, characterization, plot (from what i remember) i just struggled with the relationship and ending bits

i bought this game a while ago, but i don't think i ever done a full playthrough. i dont really like how the endings we get depend on the relationship we have with other characters and yadayadayada. i havent played in a while but i found it difficult to start a romance? i cant tell what options are for romance and what ones are platonic/antagonistic. i would've also preferred a gender selectable mc, (rip to the gays) but beggars cant be choosers. 

wasnt this ready set go

thank you! i really love the currently chapters so far ^^

do you think maybe you can add tone indicators if possible? i cant tell when im making my character be flirty then when i check my stats i realize ive been flirting with people i didn't mean to this whole time </3

I want to say that I really love how engaging the writing is! I look forward to future chapters. I’ve read, edited, etc… a lot of works: interactive and non-interactive, and yours really stands out to me! I find your book (specifically) to be really unique. Not only is the punctuation, grammar, and vocabulary exquisite… but the characterization, foreshadowing, plot, and story telling are, too! If you don’t already have plans to put a price on the final version, I truly believe you should consider it. It’s even better considering you’re a humble person/author, which we don’t see much of those these days… Based on the comments, it’s fair to say that you did such a great job at pulling in readers! I recommend that everyone should read this at least once. 

is there an explanation between the different paths? (the sun, dusk, moon, & whatever the other options are…) i dont wanna pick to follow a path i know nothing about 

well i guess im dumb because i had no clue this was a retelling/inspired by percy jackson </3 i see greek mythology, i play. i really like your unique way of storytelling. it got me hooked

before i buy this, i looked at the walkthrough and what exactly is the “speakeasy” end? more specifically, is the speakeasy end a good end, neutral end, tragic end, etc

hi, just checking in. you said a while ago you were going to update it in august…will this still be updated?

it’s unfortunate that axels route was cancelled i really saw potential there

update: its grown on me 

i dont see the appeal of Ethan x Theo at all

As always, you never disappoint. Also.. the template works fine on mobile, at least for me. it just has to be landscape rather than portrait mode. 

wait i noticed theres a new “update” but is there no new chapter? is it just a revamp

how many ch. will full game be if the demo is only 2

i really like it so far

it says in the game description, recently updated i think. 

“

The game features:

2 Love interests - each with their own struggles to discover.  (Axels route has been cancelled.) “

i adore the update (and the story in general) you have so much potential! i love how the concept is unique and the characters are well made already. my only request is you don’t stress yourself out. it’s normal to feel overwhelmed and i want you to know its totally okay if you ever need breaks! especially in the if community, as readers tend to pressure the authors. 

as for the update, i encountered a few coding errors whilst playing through the new chapter. i didn’t screenshot them but i can go back and replay to find the errors again if you’d like to pinpoint where they are.

this game is a still work in progress. it’s not dropped, don’t worry. i follow the author on tumblr, and they post updates, q&as, and snippets of the characters frequently. 

++ interactive fiction is a long process, as they need to write, code and check for mistakes/errors; most interactive fiction authors work solo, so this may be the cause for delays in updates. sorry for the long text. have a good day !!! 

i’m back in your comments again bc i still love this game !!! good luck with the progress, everything looks good and intriguing so far. 

on another note: don’t let the ppl rushing u stress u out. let yourself relax

cancelled 

i cant scroll down on mobile

interesting concept, i like it. is this still being updated?

NO WAY IT ENDED LIKE TBAT PLS HAVE MERXY THIS IS SO GOOD

exactly.

wow this is a rly intriguing prologue i love it

oh my god i need more

the amount of love i have towards alex is insane

thx for the reply !! i look forward to more

is this still being worked on or is it on hiatus

is this still being worked on or is it on hiatus 

is there an option to save?

that was such a great start i need more omg

WHY DID IT END LIKE THAT