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Thank you so much! Yes, precisely. There were supposed to be more customers when I conceived the idea for the story, and I still have them in my brain. (Poor them. I deleted them and said goodbye for real.) It was my first time writing a narrative in English, so for now, I just did my best. But I still have more stories in my head, and I want to study more, work harder, and develop them further.

Honestly, I was really really worried when I published my English writing for the first time, so you never know how much your comment meant to me! I truly appreciate it. I will keep going!

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hey... first time making a game, first time writing a narrative in English - all things considered, without a doubt you're talented! Let that universe in your head stay alive, run wild with your imagination, keep writing - everything will get better with time! And it's already so good, you have nothing to worry about. 

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Yes, I did notice - her writing flows for the most part - and even though it looks simple, it sometimes takes a lot  of efforts to make writing look effortless! Hey, I am sure you were dealing with a lot of constraints, and if I am not wrong, you had your own game to focus on, which you were painstakingly translating to be able to do justice to your ideas! ( I am still in the middle of that, taking me time to process, I wish I knew Portuguese hehe).

And it was still you who contributed in making this game playable, I have a feeling they're probably just grateful to you! But yes, maybe in the future they can make their ideas shine even more with Ren'py!