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(+5)

Every character in this game would have to be mentally retarded in order to not see exactly what is happening in the school.

The incredibly weak writing kills what should be a fun corruption game.

Think I'm kidding? Here's an example:

On Day 2 the MC can choose to punish Rina, Ayumi, or both. If he chooses both, he can then let Ayumi choose Rina's punishment. Then, when Ayumi is asking what she should use to conduct the punishment, the MC's phone rings and he says out loud, "in the left hand drawer of my desk?"

He is literally 6 inches from both of the girls. Then, he walks over to the desk, reaches into one of the drawers on the left side of the desk, and pulls out a perfect instrument with which Ayumi can conduct her punishment.

How can either of the girls be in the room for those events to play out, listen half of the phone conversation, watch how that phone conversation plays out after the fact, but NOT realize that they are being monitored in real time?!?

(+1)

I didn't punish both of them when I played but when you restrain yourself from going all out its alot more believable. 

(+2)

Of all the things that you could've nitpicked, this is definitely not one of them.

-Everyone knew the girls were going to be punished because MC came in their class and dragged them to his office.

-Spanking was already established as a common punishment practice.

-It's not a secret that there are cameras around the Academy. It is a secret that they're broadcasting it live.

-If the girls knew that MC's Assistant was somehow watching him and the girls at the office, they wouldn't think too much of it. It was literally MC's first day and she was guiding him a bit so he knows how to do his job.


And finally, there are consequences that will happen if you choose some of the more perverted options, and will cause some of the students to realize something's going on.

I normally don't respond to criticism, I usually try to learn from them, but I just think this one is not an issue.