I hear plenty of electronic bleeps, and in the minor key, so the ‘AI taking over’ vibe is already there! 0:55-1:22 feels a bit much though, too much stuff going on at the same time making it feel a bit like a chaos at times. The theme is nice, though there’s little variation on the main chord progression. I like the ending at 2:03 - 2:15. I would have just ended it at 2:15 though, as the weird silence from 2:15 - 2:24 makes you think it has already ended. Overall, nice entry :D
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Thank you for your constructive feedback! I didn't work on this song as much as I would have liked to but my mixing skills still aren't great so I'm not sure if I could have made it much better with time, lol. I can understand why it might sound chaotic in parts, another friend told me the same thing
I'm glad you liked the 2:03 - 2:15 part. I think it sounds cool, I'm just not sure if it's the right place for the song because I felt like that's where the song kind of deflates. I feel like this song can go in a lot of different directions so I think I'll be working on this track more and maybe more tracks like this
Anyway, thank you for your comment!