I finish the demo today and for now i'm loving it so much!
I really like the form you write and the characters are very likeable, Oswin is so funny when you're playful with him, and Zhan is so sweet, I wanna take care of them (even if i'm a little cautious of them)
But in my top of characters for now are the MC parents, I love them so much, they feel so warm? Idk how to explain it, just they feel like home.
Also I love the mule, I have to try the others horses but for now my girl Epona is winning.
For resume, great job! I will waiting happy for more!^v^
And my condolences for you loss, I hope you and your husband get well soon