At the risk of opening with a cliché, I only created an account to praise you on making what is by far the best VN I've ever read (played?). It is easily in a league of its own when compared to even the most highly rated VN out there. I loved everything about it from the art, the chemistry, the humour, the ups, downs all the way to the masterful writing which is where your novel really shines. I can't remember the last time a game brought me to the verge of tears and more than once.
Apart from very few grammar mistakes, there is really nothing I would change. great job and thanks.