Yes I can.
For example:
There are such horrible monsters everewhere.
This line makes sense but
terrible would fit much better.
Line when she is caught by a zombie Ya, there is something. Doesn't make any sense.
Opps, Got Caught, Wait where are you touching is also weird
Oops, I got caught, wait, where are you touching me!? makes much more sense
Another one is: Got saved? when she scares away the infected horse. This line Doesn't make much sense because nobody saved her.
Get out of here quickly. should be: I should/need to get out of here quickly.
Has it been discovered is also completely wrong.
And there is a LOT of lines that are written with really weird english or just don't make sense.
And the thing she uses to cut the chain fance are not hydraulic cutter but heavy duty wire cutter.