Ah the classic visual novel, interesting concept! The dialogue was well written, I like how each playthrough you are given different prompts, and the overall creepy yet light-hearted vibe of the story. VN's aren't my preferred genre so I won't let that influence my opinion, but I definitely think having some sort of menu or indicator that tracks the different endings you obtain would help to know that you're making "progress" in a matter of words. Maybe tiny hints as well to lead you to the other endings? I'm not sure how many there are but given the amount of things you can purchase from the restaurant it seems like a lot! Those were only minor critiques however, this is a good package altogether!