This vn has a different pacing compared to the others. Feels like whatching a cabaret musical.
Lots of props and gimmicks. Its very spunky, Very meta and takes a mundane theme and adds lots of character to It.
It may be not for everyone's tastes, but i liked.
If you are having troubble with the pacing/props/etc. Just go with the mindset of "im going to watch a cabaret musical/performance" and its Fine.
Great work!