You MUST include more scenes like this in the upcoming chapters :-)
I bought the game here since I found that your page on Patreon is under investigation :-/ maybe you could move to Discord or F95.
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I read someone complaying for the colors used in the dialogue window...that's true, sometimes it is quite difficult to read the text.
I changed a little the script.rpy to set all colors to white and now it is easier to read; I also changed the textbox.png image in the GUI folder with a dark grey shade, this also helps. For the dialogues withour a character I'm still studying the best alternattive.
Hope this does not upset you.