brother take all the time you need, just make sure the story isnt cringe and make sure we keep this mc egotistic thinking hes jesus. 2. you got some good plot points and i have high hope for everything upcoming in the story and characteristics of the girls to tie into it.3. the battle scene with the purple worm A tier stuff brother. mostly talking about the strats behind it and how you showed it.anyways best of luck on your work and wish you the best of life