I'm a little confused by the supposed gender of the PC, as they're obviously feminine but the ogre's lines claim they have a dick? Are they a futa?
Letting the player character get naked/lose their clothes is a very enticing thought to me, personally. It would need some writing legwork to justify, but I had the idea of letting the character trade their own clothes away in return for the vampire's (?) clothes. Nothing wrong with a "PC is (now) naked, deal with it" plot either.
The line when you search an empty hiding spot seems to hint at some way to tell if it's occupied, but I couldn't find anything.
I don't see what mouse interaction would add. That said, having an indicator for what you're interacting with would be good. In particular I was unable to talk to the centaur in the garden.