Picked this up yesterday and I've been having a lot of fun with it! I'm normally pretty picky with this kinda stuff and I'm so burned out on unfinished kink RPG Maker games. It's great this one is finished, and it's got a lot of polish, you can tell this wasn't something someone spent a weekend on coding and spiriting a bit while working the bike pump.
The writing is a little campy, but it's far from anything I'd define as bad. It's pretty decent for a kink game. The locations so far in the early game are pretty cookiecutter RPGMaker faire, but save for hiring a pixel artist or really shopping around for tilesets that might look horrid kludged together, it's pretty passable. That's about all I can really say when it comes to anything resembling a negative, and even that's a stretch.
I really don't have anything constructively negative to say about the game that impedes in its intent to be a fun little kinky romp.
The spritework for the characters, animations, omorashi stuff, mechanics, and a "kink first, but you can change the game to be more challenging and RPG-focused" approach is novel and ideal for my kinda interest. I'm gonna keep going, I've only gotten Maple and Noelle so far and I've already put them through quite a few situations...
My wishing well wish is that eventually the author revisits the game (when they've had a chance to relax and recharge, this is already years of work) and does another detail pass with more content eventually, they've definitely got the knack and investing more time and energy into this could really take it from "pretty dang good" to "fuckin' awesome."