I just completed the game current version and i will now review it.
Firstly the mechanic
Everything about this game fight mechanic is pretty good, it might not look anything special at first gaze but the team combo and tactics mechanic of the game is unlike anything i seen in turn based games nowadays, because you have to think what is best to use to actually win and not spamming stun ability to make your enemies skip their turn.
Now to the story (no spoiler)
The story is very compelling i could tell the creator really put their effort into it, sure this is erotic genre RPG maker game but the sexual content is kept at minimum, which is a good move tbh since this game story in each chapters is so serious most of the time you probably will forget this is an adult game. Well technically the focus is on transformation of the MC body idk if you guys gonna find that sexual or not.
Criticism
The shards gacha is honestly cool and all but i don't wanna waste time gambling for the shard i want, maybe make it so you can summon an entity in a dream and challenges them to obtain the named shard you want? Would be cool to be able to have mulan boss fight.
Also some of the quests is too confusing for example the chapter 1 part 1 quest where you have to find 5 items around the map and then talk to everyone about everything but then you would have to go out and return and talk to them again before you'll be able to continue the story.
Honestly if there wasn't a walkthrough of the game i would get stuck alot.