The presentation really adds to the narrative here! Once you have all the pieces together for the final I think it'll really elevate it. Normally I would want an option to skip through text but for your game to not have one honestly kind of works. It forces you to slow down and take in all the information being given to you and traps you in a really depressing conversation (like an actual breakup). You've put lot of care into the stylistic choices and layout and it shows. I'm excited to see where this goes when you add more of those elements. Great job! :)