i can't express how much i love your writing, it is genuinely super good. As the game is now, your styling and narrative are already so solid that it holds up super well even without the illustrations (but I'm really excited to see them in the final :) ). My favorite part is the background color switch to indicate morning/night. It seems like such a simple thing but I 100% would have never thought to do that, it works so well. Honestly I don't have a whole lot to critique, you're in a very good place with this and have clearly put a lot of care into it. If I had to nitpick anything, maybe giving the content warning more visual interest or putting it as a popup so it's a little more clear (but that's more an accessibility thing than technical issue). Overall you've done an amazing job!