Hey bro, this game at first sight looked like a normal fangame that is normaly decent, but after playing it, this really does look like a good story, the only bad thing i saw are the small typos, that were just small and rarely visible sometimes, (from my perspective) and the art, the art itself is actually not bad! of course it may need some remodel but it fits perfectly in the TCOAAL storyline, the personality of our main protagonist is sure not something you would expect at first sight, you gave him much personality and funny moments in my opinion, i really hope you are going to continue this game in the future, my advise would be that you write a post on subreddit of TCOAAL (r/CoffinofAndyandLeyley) and seek for the opinion of other people and support, i really liked the idea of having the sounds effect when someone talks, it adds more immersion instead of just silence, and i just LOVED the choices you can select, and the fact that you used the original TCOAAL storyline with a bit of spicyness of your own story really feels clean and original, talking about original i wanna address the dialogues of Andrew and Ashley (From my perspective) looked actually in character and original, and the music that fits the main protagonist's style is fantastic, the "80's" music felt good while playing the game, well expect the fact that i got Earraped when i opened the game but that's fine, to be honest i hope all the best for this game and you, Good luck