Thats understandable, it's kinda hard to fit character introductions, hard emotional scenes, and a sex scene in a less than 10 minutes demo while getting my message across naturally. It doesn't help that, while I've always been told I'm a good writer, this is really for first try at story telling. Regardless, once I have more story to work with, I absolutely plan on fleshing out the characters and sprinkling my message throughout