The game was extremely confusing. The writing is full of mistakes and is very blunt, lacks nuance, is too redundant and heavily descriptive. It's too bad because I love the art style and I think this could have potential. For the paid version, I think making sure the English is correct and beta-ing the writing would be a good idea.
The music switches too fast in my opinion. And I felt that we don't really have a choice in the mood of the game. We may choose one option but it doesn't necessarily have an effect ?
I'm sorry, I wish I could have liked it. Good luck for the rest and thank you for making this free version available.