i love milo so, so much! i spent so much time trying to find every little easter eggs! great game, i really enjoyed it and milo's character as well hes such a cutie ( i played the whole game twice to have the two options..) ! i noticed a few bugs with the text but i don't know if it was on purpose for the scary side? if not i can tell you where i spotted those bugs!
Here is the few bugs i noticed while playing ! : " You're my everything so i can't... " during the rough Milo run, it's a few line after Eris got attacked a second time by the gang member
" Eris! A-Are you alright? What happened? " With rough Milo when you choose the blue eyes after Ryan stole the USB
" Why are you even talking to my girlfriend..." With the sly Milo when choosing blue eyes after Ryan stole the USB
To describe the bug it's just the text that's duplicated, i'm a mac player if it have anything to do with it, hope i helped!