I really enjoyed this game! I loved the story and the characters and all the ideas going into it. It's a shame there won't be more of this story but I'm happy to have played it and can't wait to see what other games you'll make ^^
For a more proper review all I can say is the mini games were a bit tricky personally (both parts). If possible maybe a difficulty option for the first path would be nice too? Aside for that I can't really think of any issues haha.
I do think it would be nice if you could add a gallery at all? To be able to look at the cg collection after the game or see which ones you still need to collect outside the credits? And maybe some kind of character profiles to show off? Just for little fun details like age, height, etc. But I understand if that sounds like a lot of work and you'd prefer to focus on new projects now! Maybe they'd be something to keep in mind for those future projects!
All in all I loved the game! I liked how it was written and the endings even if it was a bit confusing at times (are they actually food???) but it was all around great and I'm glad to have played it. So glad I made an account just to comment haha!
(P.S. I know fanart is acceptable but would it be okay to possibly write fan fiction/role play the characters of the game? (With proper credit to you/the game of course!) I wanted to ask since I really enjoyed the characters and would love writing things about them and this world if you wouldn't mind!)