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Oh my gosh, congratulations for finishing the game ❤️❤️

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Thank you! Are you going to play it now that it's done? I loved seeing your feedback during the development. ^w^

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Hello, I haven't been active in this website for a year because I've been busy with my college,just few time looking. It's my free time the other day, so I logged in. Coincidentally, the first thing I see is an update for this. I was like, "Wow, I feel lucky that the full game is out when I decided to surf again." I immediately downloaded it. I'm glad that my last saves are still there.


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I really like the music you put in the main menu. I stayed there for a whole 5 minutes. I noticed you added a gallery, finally! The CGs I've been waiting for, haha. I played it all over again and I'm surprised that someone talked. Like, there's a fully voiced for them all (ノ*0*)ノAshley's voice is a bit deeper than I imagined. Saito's voice is playful. Malachi, on the other hand, is flirty, bwaa. In my opinion, the BGM is a bit loud during their first confrontation? (It's adjustable in settings, so it's okay, and I could still hear their voices clearly) I miss Malachi's blush, Ashley's smile, and that frown Saito has (づ>/////<)づ Omg, what's with the "come here, kitty"? I really giggle and have my heart skip a beat. It really hits different with audio in it. I really love that you animate their mouths when speaking. I can see their pokey teeth, haha. 

I chose Malachi first, (all along I thought his name was "ma-la-chi" but it's "ma-la-kai" (づ_ど) ) He's still this flirty but easily flustered guy, haha. I swear, I really called him cute multiple times! He's really sweet, and his teasing is just ₍ᐢ._.ᐢ₎♡༘ During that beach scene (the sound of rain is a bit louder than his voice, so I adjusted the music), Malachi is such a softy. I know he's pushing us away because he doesn't want us to get hurt... man! I was surprised by those CGs. I like his voice when he speaks softly. I also like that he loves art. Why is he blushing after taking off his shirt? ૮꒰ ˶> ༝ <˶꒱ა staph! I literally feel my cheeks blush the moment he does his move, but haha, he's so cute when flustered. That peppy girl is cheeky, and I like her. She let me see the childish side of Malachi, that's so adorable! Gosh, Idk how many times I described him cute ( ՞ ܸ. .ܸ՞ )

Daisuke, my cutiepie! He really grew fond of me. For someone who has similar taste, I feel like I focus on him more than Malachi, lmao. That gentle look and tone is જ⁀➴♡. I'm eating a croissant when he offered MC a drink, it felt like I'm really drinking a tea (one I choose) with him across the screen. He surprised me when he spoke that line with an accent cuz I didn't understand it for a sec. ('^' ?) Idk if it's intentional or not, but it could be some trick in the game. Daisuke's mood affects me when Malachi just ran off, now we're both worried about him. He's so cute with glasses, no wonder someone fainted when they saw him wearing it. I'm really glad that he was there to calm Malachi after being overwhelmed by his anger. I was surprised to see him like a sneaky patootie *cough* finding something upstairs (I actually didn't pursue this one cuz' it looks dangerous and I reload again to choose the safest for my first try). Gosh, after hearing Itami's explanation, all I can say is, no wonder he knows a lot and learning about special blood, prophecy and stuff is because he's a big boss himself! You really gave me a big surprise there. I didn't expect that.

I actually forgot that Itami's a lieutenant! I remember it was not mentioned before or maybe I just remember it wrong. Before playing, I predicted that this guy will use his dominant power to hypnotize a lot of people under his knees cuz' he's a final boss. Guess that one is correct if he can control them. Itami sure has a husky British accent and also an arrogant tone. It fits him with that noble etiquette. You did a good job writing Itami's lines; they truly sound like a villain.(Actually, all their lines n the plotline was well written) MC's bravery is worth mentioning when she confronted him for Malachi. Itami, u sadist! How dare you hit them ;-; although I admit that he's attractive IF you remove the sadist persona lol. Okay, I was actually expecting his whip but he.... looks gentle. I also had the same reaction with MC but when you hear what he said in a calm tone is just. Is this guy for real?! So I'm kinda right bout the love interests to be a hitman. Poor thing, they didn't know the target is innocent. The way he explains things, man just trying to throw ourselves into a trap. No wonder he's being gentle. It's really suspicious! But what he said is correct; things are complicated between the sire and which side to fight for.

I really like Ashley, on how much he was worried about us and offering help when we need it. He's there to comfort and give advice. Come on, who wouldn't fall for those blushes? I remember you saying that he's really protective in other routes, and yeah, just look at Melachi's route. He becomes so moody the moment he thought we almost/got hurt. (I always pick the most pacifist choices cuz' I kinda have an idea what he will do if he knew) He's such a gentleman. While doing Malachi's route, he does look like a character that says, "You give me light, now I will do anything to make you safe."

It's actually my first time hearing Tsuna, I guess he/she appeared in other routes.

I really love that soft piano in this route. Could you tell me what the piece is called? I haven't heard all of the Characters but from what I heard so far in Malachi's route, they really did a great job and efforr for it .𖥔 ݁  But seriously, this feels nostalgic for me. It grows fond since I've played it in the demo and seeing it done really makes me happy.

I haven't played other routes yet, but I will in my free time. Sorry for the late reply, again. I just finished revising our thesis, lol. The mystery is my cup of tea, and curiosity is pushing me too.

I have a few questions though. Can I still play Malachi's route after it disappeared by loading the save, or do I need to download the game again? About the ending of each route, I remember you mentioned that they're gonna have three bad endings each, is it still correct? Then they have one ending before jumping to other?

P.S. I'm really thankful that you answered my questions during the development stage. I also love it too! I actually didn't expect this to be long just for a single route ૮꒰ ˶> ༝ <˶꒱ა I'm actually writing notes while playing the game. I should have just summarized it.

Im silently asking if Daisuke have route, even if its not in this game.

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Thank you for your review!

Sorry about the default settings, the sliders got moved around a lot while testing, so just adjust the volumes until you're comfortable. 🩷

There are plans for Daisuke to have a route, but it likely won't be voiced. Same with Itami, as any DLC will take a while to record audio for and I've already taken up a lot of the VA's time. 😅

In order to play the routes, you should start the game, then skip to the character choice. Each route will tell you when it ends, then return you to the choice screen. 😊

I believe they do still have three bad endings, yes. Though one in Malachi's doesn't technically end, it forces you to make a different choice.

Tsuna is a girl, Itami's maid, and she's actually voiced by me. 🤭

Saito's kitty lines make me melt too, I love him so much. His VA is lovely to work with, all the VAs are. (⁠ᵔ⁠ᴥ⁠ᵔ⁠)

Yeah, finally got a gallery! Took a bit to get working, but I was determined. 😋

The line with an accent is me being silly, if you recognised it at all, it's a parody of a Cockney accent. 🤭

Itami is like a cat. He may look soft, but get too close and you'll get his claws. 👀

A route with him would likely end in death, similar vibes to Fairytale. 😅

I do need to find credit for the music, it's been that long that I don't recall where I got it from, but I'm planning to look it up.

The creator said I don't need to credit them, but I do intend to. ^w^

Honestly, this long is amazing, keep it coming. I want to hear your thoughts on all the routes! 🥰

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I'm glad, I finished all the routes the other day (though I haven't read all the dialogue as I always get their ending on the first try lol) I choose Ashley next as he's the yandere *smirk* I laugh when the two other boys look at us with pity. Same reaction with Mc when he just snitches us to Itami. I love how responsible and caring he is. Did he get the tendency because he has formed this protectiveness as the oldest to keep the younger ones safe? He's a yandere willing to remove any hindrance in his way, but it's understandable, especially after knowing his POV and the secret behind the world. He might sometimes be repulsive but careful too. You almost got me during their confrontation with Daisuke if I didn't read Malachi's first because I'd think the same as Ashley. I am a bit sad he needs to kill us for misunderstanding. I mean, why would we wear it on a broad day anyway xD He's so cunning, and I LOVE IT! I thought both of them were close, even if it's not that close like with Malachi, but they're pretty much strangers to each other. I had a good impression of Legato when he appeared. When Ashley mentioned the "lover," I wondered if he jumped to a conclusion so fast because I haven't heard any confession yet, but considering that "they" are aware of the loop, it might be because of that. It's a bit of a pity that his route is short, but I get it due to how possessive he is. He took the confinement to the next level, ack.

I chose Saito last as his route is the longest. In his route, you could understand everything. It's a good choice for me to make him last. He's so cold during our first interaction, but he's playful if you get to know him. I love seeing his smug and mischievous smile like a prideful cat despite calling us kitten. Throughout his route, he got my attention more than the other two. He's so straight to the point, and his blush is adorable. It gave me mixed feelings that he tried not to show he was hurt and remained calm. Itami's hit just uck, that sounds so painful (I experienced it too but with a teacher before she was reported of abusing children so I get it) He sounds professional if not slacking, putting the egg in the dishwasher, and the fact that the restaurant mismanagement, lol. The way he teases makes me smile widely, and I like the confidence he has. He lightens the mood with a tease, and he looks seductive with the fang blood. I gonna be honest the way he flirts is so fluttering. Why your so good at it >///< When I saw that he was "killed" by Saito, it was too good to be true since I knew there was progress in how to successfully defeat him.I didn't see the easter egg when the mark name appeared. You got me reversed in Chujitsuna; I thought she was also a sadist and a villainess not until Antonio appeared. Reuben is so cute, especially when he rushed to hug Saito tight.

Now I have a few questions: In Saito's route, it was said that Itami planned to adopt 7 children. Let's say 3 of them are Saito, Malachi, and Ashley. Then the other 3 are Daisuke, Legato, and Tsuna. Who's the 7th? Is it Reuben? But he came much later, so I'm thinking it's not him. It is also said that people who are aware of the world are probably real people; it reminds me of Itami as he broke the 4th wall a bunch of times. I thought that maybe he's also from the real world lol but I'm probably sure he's an aware NPC as he can do coding like AI. I'm really glad that Daisuke and Itami will have their own story. I noticed it actually when Itami said he's gonna kill all of them except Tsuna and said "come here" and her interaction with Daisuke. omg so cute! Could it be Tsuna will be the protagonist with Itami and Daisuke as the next love interest? Ah, I've fallen for Daisuke even more with how smooth he is in there. Oh, btw. I also want to ask how we met Ashley in real life like is he a senpai or something? 

p.s. oh gosh, you have a cute voice >3< no wonder it sounds a bit different but I thought they're from the same VA! that's good hiding there XD

Thank you for the wonderful experience of the game. I'm looking forward to your upcoming projects. I also took a look and noticed that "Fairytale" is now completed, so I'll go hop there next.

Well, Ashley is overprotective to the point of obsession because he's seen MC die many times and he was powerless to stop it. He believes that if he takes control of them, he can take control of the situation and keep them alive. Ah, Daisuke in Ashley's route is incredibly cautious. He believes in the idea that if he doesn't kill a vampire, it'll kill him. He's beyond reason there, but he's a lot calmer in the other routes. Daisuke and Malachi are best friends in Malachi's route, but in Ashley's route, they don't even know each other. In Saito's route, they hate each other. The dynamics change with each route, so it's not just the same story from different perspectives. 

Which Easter Egg were you looking for? There are several. ^w^

The seven children are indeed, Saito, Malachi, Ashley, Daisuke, Tsuna, and Legato. The missing child is Ayame, who in passing, is under the code name Vivace at Caesura. You see her alongside Tsuna in Saito's route when Daisuke's having him taken to the cells. 

Ashley is our senpai, yes. He's older than Saito and Malachi, and it's implied he's older than MC too, which is why they're seen as acting immature when he's the rational one. 

Although I do plan to do a route for Daisu and Itami, it may not happen for some time. 

I'll try my best, though. ^-^

You think my voice is cute? >w<

Thank you. ♥

I'm no VA myself, but I tried my best. ^.^

Fairytale is indeed completed, and I'd love to hear your views on that too!