Alright. I feel like the game is quite fast-paced. The characters could benefit from more development or being more fleshed out, rather than just briefly speaking before joining the party. In general, I believe the game shows promise. I think you did a good job how you captured the players' attention with the introduction of the bridgeman, as well as the music choices and title screen. The storyline is intriguing so far, and I am eager to see what happens in chapter two.
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I agree fully with you!
I'll take a bit more time to flesh out chapter 2 and make the characters relationships a bit more complex. I'm glad that the story has caught your eye, I have many plans to make sure that this short series is a decent game.
Thank you for playing! I hope you will enjoy any future projects I plan to work on!